This is a sample of the book Title I am thinking of using. Leave me a comment below and let me know what you think.
More sample of my work below. I know my punctuation is more than likely off and when I am finished I will have it edited buy someone who knows what they are doing.
The blond man scowled. He hated when the Admiral Gedor called him Chelli. His name was Bjorn Chelli, a one time rogue mercenary working for the highest bidder. Now he worked for the Bathshe. Not for Admiral Gedor. "This is not the plan, Admiral. You are starting a war here."
"I'm testing their defenses, Chelli." There was detest in his voice. "This is the plan. Your job is to obey."
Bjorn Chelli knew what he had to do. Gedor was power hungry, he enjoyed fighting way too much. This was no going to end well for him. But Pan had told them both the plan, and Bjorn would have to do what he needed to do to get the job done. "May I be dismissed sir?"
Gedor's tension had left his voice, and it was calm. He was in control again. "Of course."
Bjorn turned and walked off the bridge and found is own personal team waiting for him in the docking bay. They stood before a ship, his own ship he had used so many year ago. The ship he used when he was recruited for this job, which was now his life.
"Well?" asked his first in command. "What's the deal?"
"We head out before he jumps."
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